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Old Nov 12, 2007 | 08:57 PM
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A poem.

Failure

The road I travel ain't got yellow bricks,
but is paved with *******s, *****es, and ******.
And when it seems that I'm down for the count,
a tiny light shines to help me out.
And when it comes, it burns my eyes
and nobody can hear my muffled cries.
So alone I sit for another dark night,
with nothing but my feelings to fight.

When day breaks I wake alone,
nobody near to call my own,
seven missed calls on my phone,
and I no longer care.
I feel I reap what I've not sown,
My best layed plans have all been blown,
so I just want to make it known,
that I have given up.


-Corey
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 08:59 PM
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wow......
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 09:03 PM
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damn man, you wrote that from scratch? It's deep. I really like it.

I wrote one too.

There once was a man from Nantuckett
Who's dick was so long he could suck it.
He had a big grin
as he wiped off his chin
and said, 'if my ear was a *****, i'd **** it.'


I know, I'm a *****
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 09:05 PM
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well you're no robert frost that's for sure.
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 09:06 PM
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damn man, you wrote that from scratch? It's deep. I really like it.
Yeah.
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 09:06 PM
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Originally Posted by jramosthe1st!
well you're no robert frost that's for sure.
Okay?
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 09:07 PM
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Just dont go killing yourself or anything like that, k? I used to write poetry when i was super depressed.
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 09:21 PM
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Originally Posted by ryguy
Just dont go killing yourself or anything like that, k? I used to write poetry when i was super depressed.
Lol I appreciate the thought. Same here, more or less.... but I am bipolar, so this kinda happens. It doesn't help when a lady friend of mine contacts me out of the blue and makes me think of the old days and things I want to change so bad, but can't do.
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 10:38 PM
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i think im bipolar.

but i get into fights and stuff when im mad instead of writing poetry.

i think poetry is a better idea.
Old Nov 12, 2007 | 11:03 PM
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There is darkness all around me
Deep, piercing black I cannot breathe
My heart has been raped.

The pain is everlasting
I miss you so much babe
Want to hold you in my arms again, girl
Want to -



-Goth Stan, southpark
Old Nov 13, 2007 | 02:10 PM
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when im angry i usually take it out on the car since it is the only thing that can really make me angry but nice poem
Old Nov 13, 2007 | 05:08 PM
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Originally Posted by Ayuaddict
i get into fights and stuff when im mad instead of writing poetry.
yeah i bet there's nothing more soothing than smacking your little sister around.

j/k i just had to say that.
Old Nov 28, 2007 | 05:57 PM
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How could you?
How could you take your life like that?
Why did you?
Why did you take your life like that?

You used to take the world in stride
You never would run and hide
You always kept a smile
Even when life was not worth while

Why did you give that up?
Why did you let that smile go?

They said you could not control,
Your life as you were on Iraq patrol
You could not live your life
So you ended your strife

Is it worth it?
Is it worth it to take your life instead of fighting?

If you would have died fighting, you would have died honorably
Instead you grabbed a dagger, and ended yourself so horribly
If you had fought, you could soar
But you stopped, and you are no more

Did we see it?
Did we see it coming from so long ago?

When you were called names and pushed in to the wall
You smiled back and said it didn't hurt you at all
But I saw it in your heart
As it tore your life apart

We will miss you Mini Plott

RIP Andrew Plott
Dec 26, 1988- Nov 23, 2007
Old Nov 28, 2007 | 06:31 PM
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Damn dude.
Old Nov 28, 2007 | 06:56 PM
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holy f****** emo batman!



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