A poem.
11-12-2007, 08:57 PM
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A poem.
Failure
The road I travel ain't got yellow bricks,
but is paved with *******s, *****es, and ******.
And when it seems that I'm down for the count,
a tiny light shines to help me out.
And when it comes, it burns my eyes
and nobody can hear my muffled cries.
So alone I sit for another dark night,
with nothing but my feelings to fight.
When day breaks I wake alone,
nobody near to call my own,
seven missed calls on my phone,
and I no longer care.
I feel I reap what I've not sown,
My best layed plans have all been blown,
so I just want to make it known,
that I have given up.
-Corey
The road I travel ain't got yellow bricks,
but is paved with *******s, *****es, and ******.
And when it seems that I'm down for the count,
a tiny light shines to help me out.
And when it comes, it burns my eyes
and nobody can hear my muffled cries.
So alone I sit for another dark night,
with nothing but my feelings to fight.
When day breaks I wake alone,
nobody near to call my own,
seven missed calls on my phone,
and I no longer care.
I feel I reap what I've not sown,
My best layed plans have all been blown,
so I just want to make it known,
that I have given up.
-Corey
11-12-2007, 09:03 PM
#3
damn man, you wrote that from scratch? It's deep. I really like it.
I wrote one too.
There once was a man from Nantuckett
Who's dick was so long he could suck it.
He had a big grin
as he wiped off his chin
and said, 'if my ear was a *****, i'd **** it.'
I know, I'm a *****
I wrote one too.
There once was a man from Nantuckett
Who's dick was so long he could suck it.
He had a big grin
as he wiped off his chin
and said, 'if my ear was a *****, i'd **** it.'
I know, I'm a *****
11-12-2007, 09:21 PM
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Lol I appreciate the thought. Same here, more or less.... but I am bipolar, so this kinda happens. It doesn't help when a lady friend of mine contacts me out of the blue and makes me think of the old days and things I want to change so bad, but can't do.
11-12-2007, 11:03 PM
#10
There is darkness all around me
Deep, piercing black I cannot breathe
My heart has been raped.
The pain is everlasting
I miss you so much babe
Want to hold you in my arms again, girl
Want to -
-Goth Stan, southpark
Deep, piercing black I cannot breathe
My heart has been raped.
The pain is everlasting
I miss you so much babe
Want to hold you in my arms again, girl
Want to -
-Goth Stan, southpark
11-13-2007, 05:08 PM
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11-28-2007, 05:57 PM
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How could you?
How could you take your life like that?
Why did you?
Why did you take your life like that?
You used to take the world in stride
You never would run and hide
You always kept a smile
Even when life was not worth while
Why did you give that up?
Why did you let that smile go?
They said you could not control,
Your life as you were on Iraq patrol
You could not live your life
So you ended your strife
Is it worth it?
Is it worth it to take your life instead of fighting?
If you would have died fighting, you would have died honorably
Instead you grabbed a dagger, and ended yourself so horribly
If you had fought, you could soar
But you stopped, and you are no more
Did we see it?
Did we see it coming from so long ago?
When you were called names and pushed in to the wall
You smiled back and said it didn't hurt you at all
But I saw it in your heart
As it tore your life apart
We will miss you Mini Plott
RIP Andrew Plott
Dec 26, 1988- Nov 23, 2007
How could you take your life like that?
Why did you?
Why did you take your life like that?
You used to take the world in stride
You never would run and hide
You always kept a smile
Even when life was not worth while
Why did you give that up?
Why did you let that smile go?
They said you could not control,
Your life as you were on Iraq patrol
You could not live your life
So you ended your strife
Is it worth it?
Is it worth it to take your life instead of fighting?
If you would have died fighting, you would have died honorably
Instead you grabbed a dagger, and ended yourself so horribly
If you had fought, you could soar
But you stopped, and you are no more
Did we see it?
Did we see it coming from so long ago?
When you were called names and pushed in to the wall
You smiled back and said it didn't hurt you at all
But I saw it in your heart
As it tore your life apart
We will miss you Mini Plott
RIP Andrew Plott
Dec 26, 1988- Nov 23, 2007
